Sweeping out lots of commas, a good thing. 😀 LOVING the story, I actually think the second book The King’s Sacrifice is better than the first book The Khekarian Threat – I suspect that is because the second is fresher to me than the first (I lived and breathed The Khekarian Threat for decades and it pretty well grew up as I did. Yeah it took that long).
Anyhow, I haven’t reached the uploading stage yet. Still reading, although almost finished. Tweaking one or two places. It’s worth it. Won’t be long now.