Holding Reality Together – Details Short and Sweet

Everyone loves action – readers and writers – we all want the Good Stuff, but then there’s Reality, you know, the boring bits, the bits we want to keep short and sweet so they won’t be boring bits, otherwise known (to me, anyway) as the Other Stuff, the necessary detail that hold reality together.

Description. Details. Background  stuff.

Detail counts, you can say a lot with a mundane detail. By that I mean something short, a word here or a sentence there, I don’t mean every single detail. One or two words will do it without exaggerating the whole to the extent it takes over the story.

From book 1 in the Khekarian series, how much information did you need to realize that lovely Sasha is basically an empty-headed, big-busted nymphomaniac and every teenage boy’s pinup dream girl? You didn’t need (and didn’t get) her life history. A handful of lines and you got the lot, dimples, nudity, goddess proportions, everything.

How long did it take you to realize that Sevi was a woman not to be messed with, a level-headed and highly capable soldier?

Okays, I know, they’re not the boring bits.

How about the road teams? The Good Guys and the Bad Guys aren’t just sitting around waiting for the fight to start, right? What are they DOING? They are working, that’s what, they are collecting merchandise and delivering essentials to the towns and other settlements on a newly colonized world. Their job gives them their situation and enables the circumstances that brings about adventure. Great. That means that detail can’t be neglected, although it doesn’t actually matter what it is they are delivering or picking up. There’s enough there that spells out long distance and isolation, that’s all that’s needed.

What I want to capture with the sort of detail I’m talking about is a sense of that essential reality that forms the base, the backdrop, the lives of the people I’m writing about. An unrelated example: You get a better sense of a waitress’s working life if you know she has sore feet.


Yes, you probably guessed it, I’m stuck in the middle of working out some of that tedious stuff for book 3.

How many rooms do you get on one floor in one wing of a small palace? Is it important? Actually, yes, given the situation – and no, I’m not going to tell you. The realistic answer is a few at least and can be pretty much any number, depending on design and layout.

That’s annoying because now I have to think.

You know, it’s just so much more exciting to play with exciting bits and dream up action…

…Yeah, yeah, I know. Back to work.

Cheers, all. Happy typing (or whatever you do).



2 thoughts on “Holding Reality Together – Details Short and Sweet

  1. Beth

    I say six. Yes definitely six.
    Or possibly seven, if there is one at the end.
    Or maybe only five if the rooms are large…

    Glad to be of help. 😉


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