I finally got fed up trying to work out which thread should lead off – moving them around unsettled the balance of the first chapter and, to some extent, the subsequent ones – so I wrote up a brand new one.

So now that’s settled.

The weird thing is, it’s surprisingly close to my very first idea which got ripped out in the 26 page-strip-out that unbalanced everything in the first place! Grrrr!

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